Editing official documents. Exercises in the style of the Russian language He is still in his deep youth

Exercise 10 Evaluate the use of lexical means in the given sentences; indicate the use of the word without taking into account its semantics, anachronism, euphemistic speech, ambiguity of the statement, distortion of meaning, absurdity and comicality of speech.

1. Decade of Uzbek cuisine in the restaurant will be held for five days: from 1 to 5 September. 2. The measures taken for moral and material incentives for negligent workers did not bring the desired result. 3. At the exam, he mixed up not only all the myths, but also the names of ancient heroes and gods. 4. From the end of the VI century BC. e. the flow of Greek tourists rushed to Egypt. 5. There are still shortcomings in our work that prevent us from successfully overcoming the backlog. 6. Uncomfortable in the assembly shop, it is in disrepair. 7. Farmers don't pay enough great attention fertilizer fields. 8. For five months, Moscow radio broadcast chess moves to these two continents - the Arctic and Antarctic. 9. During February, in the Moscow region, the length of the day will increase by 2 hours. 10. Good employees at our enterprise are awarded with the Board of Honor.

Exercise 11 Indicate the words, the use of which leads to a violation of lexical compatibility, correct speech errors.

1. The author of the reader has not compiled an annotation yet. 2. Crowded evenings are held in the factory club. 3. We wished the organizers to gather such evenings more often. 4. Harvesting is in full swing in the village. 5. Shevchenko opened the beginning of the harvest last year, working on the harvest; the same honor is entrusted to him today. 6. Increasing the protein content of grain poses great difficulties for researchers. 7. Two birds do not live in the same lair. 8. The Book Fair hospitably invites publishers and authors to visit the pavilions. 9. Athletes "Kolos" established 32 new achievements of the region. 10. In a magazine I read a big discussion about the role of a father in raising his children. 11. This policy is already bearing fruit. 12. Much attention will be paid to the improvement of the city. 13. We attach high priority to this issue. 14. Our farmers have won the world record for shearing wool from fine wool sheep. 15. The vast majority of those present understood this topic.

Exercise 12 Specify speech errors, edit sentences.

1. He began to write songs in his deep youth, and only now glory has fallen on his gray-haired head. 2. During these years, there has been an exuberant growth in our cinematography. 3. Ivanov has been working in this difficult area for a long time, and he does a good job. But in the last two years, he began to have negative glimpses. 4. He set so many world records that only hardened fans of sports statistics remember them. 5. Grazing of dogs is prohibited. 6. The warehouse is closed on a sanitary day due to the arrival of cockroaches. 7. It is forbidden to place household and industrial waste dumps. 8. An old house is for sale. 9. Lecture for childless parents is postponed to Thursday. 10. The students of our group have achieved a deterioration in discipline and academic performance in this semester. 11. In our work, moral and labor education is of primary importance.

1. Now I am dead, I have become the sheets of a book, and you can turn over me. 2. I myself do not like grumbling old men, and yet I am sincerely glad that I have not experienced the dishonor of ranks and the meanness of lordly awards. 3. The cat turned out to be not only solvent, but also a disciplined beast. 4. Alexander Ivanovich Koreiko was in the last fit of his youth - he was 38 years old. 5. Every night Fyodor Nikitich was visited by the same seasoned Soviet dreams. 6. The earth was slightly touched by dark paint, and the leading star signaled the onset of night in a timely manner. 7. "Antelope" has earned itself a sour reputation, it needs to be repainted. 8. The commission, hung with beards, arrived at the artel "Revenge" on three spans. 9. At that time, most men grew such state-owned, loyal hair appliances on their faces. 10. A special breed of official furniture was grown. 11. A deep wrinkle appeared on Balaganov's serene, unplowed forehead. 12. Against his will, Kozlevich plunged into the abyss of the Criminal Code, into the world of chapter three, which instructively speaks of malfeasance.

1. The new film is doomed to great success with the widest circles of the public. 2. There is another explanation for such a productive score in this match. 3. For many years I have got used to everything and do not hide, but I am proud of my stainless youth. 4. The roof is tilted, of course, not for everyone. 5. You can’t put all the blame on some fashion designers, there are other fashion chefs, and you should ask them. 6. Our hero did not lose his head and immediately paid a lightning visit to the ambassador in order to prevent this sudden decision. 7. Yes, there were once men! Not like the current tribe. But individual magnificent specimens of men have not yet disappeared even today. 8. "Hello dear!" he exclaimed, and, embracing the unexpected guest, gave him a long, friendly kiss on his salty lips. 9. An old fly selflessly beat its head against the glass. 10. Laurels of discoverers do not threaten us. 11. The new dress of the king marked the transition from evening dresses to correspondence. 12. New signs appeared in the local history museum of the city of Novokhromovsk: “Do not touch the exhibits with your hands. And feet too.

Exercise 15 In sentences, eliminate the violation of lexical compatibility of words. Justify your edit.

1. In our vocational school, we traditionally manufacture jewelry vices, hacksaws. We can produce other products as well. 2. This book consists of five parts, which give preliminary concepts about the world, God, prayers, sin, holy icons. 3. What people see who have not been in our country for a year. shocking. 4. Oleg Vasiliev, who has been studying at Notre Dame University for the third year already, is a recognized leader there. 5. In just six years of my "directorship" in the orphanage, only six children were taken into families. And there are a lot of people who want to come, they come often, but the “bride-in-law”, for the most part, ends to no avail. 6. On the eve of the cold season, preparation for winter is a matter of particular importance in the region.

Exercise 16 Opening brackets, choose the appropriate words; Justify your choice, point out the differences if available.

1. The speaker slowly uttered the words, giving each of them / special meaning, special significance, special significance /. 2 .. Innocent people take / desired, desirable / for real. 3. The author of the brochure does not provide any /substantiation, grounds/ for his conclusions. 4. Several times during the day, / check, check / time is made by radio. 5. In explanatory dictionaries various kinds of stylistic, /litters, marks/ are given. 6. Many students of our group / presented themselves, were given / the opportunity to take part in a dialectological expedition. 7. The solution proposed in the article seems / problematic, problematic /. 8. some kind of /romantic, romantic/ stories are constantly happening with the hero of the film. 9. The editor read the manuscript and made some /style, stylistic/ amendments to it. 10. Approved /status, statute/ of a new organization uniting nature lovers. 11. The work is written plain language, the /essence, essence/ of the question is immediately clarified. 12. Oblomov considered the ideal of happiness / full, satisfying / life.

Exercise 17 Eliminate lexical repetitions in the text. Note the phenomena of pleonasm and tautology.

1. The amounts of additional payments are collected from enterprises in an indisputable manner. 2. Everyone was shocked by the spectacle of the fire, which we all witnessed. 3. She did not utter a single superfluous word.

4. During this time, there are more historians and non-historians who have made a name for themselves on this topic than the participants in the events themselves, but the truth belongs to His Majesty the fact.5. The main causes of juvenile delinquency are the difficult situation in families, the harmful effects of video salons, the weak material base of leisure, the lack of methodological assistance, the lack of coordination and creative communication of teachers. 6. The team of our gymnasium has been preparing for this step for a long time. After all, not only the sign has changed, but also the content, the form of education, and the team itself. For a gymnasium, for work in it, more high level knowledge. Therefore, 50% of our team took various courses at universities last year. Also, for the last year, our team has been closely cooperating with Bauman University.

Exercise 18 Pay attention to speech insufficiency, note cases of ambiguity of the statement, distortion of its meaning. Correct the suggestions.

1. The exhibition of young artists in the House of Creativity was such a success because at the drawing lessons she managed to bring up the beautiful in her students. 2. Student Belov won first place in English. 3. They graduated from a vocational school, but in order to work well, you need direct experience at the machine tool. 4. For mistakes and shortcomings, the chairman of the state farm, Pashkov, deserves to be punished. 5. A few hours are enough to dress the whole family in warm mittens on a manual knitting machine. 6. The cash desk receives for the goods of toddler age. 7. The binding has become an integral part of the room decoration. 8. Mayakovsky's work excites readers in a variety of languages.

Exercise 19 Analyze the reasons for the absurdity and inappropriate comicality of the statement. Name the logical errors in sentences resulting from speech deficiency, correct them.

1. In the premises of the entrance factory, the sanitary and epidemiological station will prepare poisoned bait for the population. 2. Livestock specialists and wind workers of farms to carry out hoof trimming and dehorning. 3. For all livestock specialists of the departments, make strong collars on an iron chain, under which put belts or felt. 4. The factory needs two workers, one for stuffing and one for wrapping. 5. Reward nursery workers for fulfilling the plan for the incidence of children. 6. The birthday will start at three o'clock. 7. I ask you to register me without the right to housing. I promise not to live. 8. Sellers in blue sleeveless jackets, uniform skirts, jackets, all as one dark-skinned and black-whiskered, could not help but delight customers.

Insert the words that most accurately express the thought; motivate your choice. (See the words used by the author at the end of the exercise.)

Man ... (invented, found, found, invented, created) words for everything that he discovered ... (in the world, in the universe, on earth). But this is not enough. He ... (named, explained, defined, pointed to) every action and state. He ... (named, designated, explained, christened, defined) in words the properties and qualities of everything that surrounds him. Dictionary ... (reproduces, defines, displays, reflects, fixes) all changes, ... (occurring, ongoing, existing) in the world. He ... (captured, reflected, preserved) the experience and wisdom of centuries and, not lagging behind, accompanies life, ... (movement, progress, development) of technology, science, art. He can ... (highlight, name, designate, define, point to) any thing and has the means for ... (expression, designation, explanation, transmission, message) of the most abstract and generalized ideas and concepts.

Exercise 2. Analyze the author's editing (in parentheses are the words crossed out by the writer when working on the text, the words inscribed in the author's hand are in italics); explain lexical substitutions, motivate the use of words entered into the text during auto-editing.

I. 1. (Pause) Peaceful amusements have disappeared, like a dream, like a morning mist. 2. Dubrovsky and (decided) settled in his house. 3. The same disabled person who (sewed up) repaired his uniform in the commandant's anteroom entered. 4. Already from a distance their cries are heard, and the rumble (roams a little) echoes them through the forests (P.).

II. 1. Well-fed, white, important (geese) birds walked along the dam to this side of the pond. “A well-fed bird,” said Lagutin, “is fed (with steamed bran) with steamed wheat.” 2. “You, dear soul, (go, and I’ll go) go ... and tell the commissioner: (I want) I need to look around here, this and that, spin around, talk with the peasants.” 3. - (Well, go, go) Well, turn, turn the cart, otherwise they will see us again. - Lagutin sighed again, turned the cart and angrily hit (with the reins) with a twig the backside gelding (A.T.).

III. 1. ... He [Chekhov] ... burst into sweet, sincere (and deep) laughter. 2. He demanded (ordinary) everyday stories from writers. 3. Further, on the same side, in the very corner, there is a door through which Anton Pavlovich's unmarried bedroom is visible... (good) warm mornings he could be seen on the bench behind the house... (Cupr.)

3. Exercise 3. Instead of dots, insert the desired word or phrase; motivate your choice.

1. On the site of a small plant ... (erected, built, created) a large woodworking plant. 2. Depending on the specific conditions, the installation can be ... (built, mounted, created, installed) as on open area, as well as indoors. 3. Already in October, the farmer began ... (shipping, delivering, sending, handing over) green onions to the shops of the capital. 4. Technologist Kalinina proposed... (remake, convert, modernize, update, change) the design of two... (large, large, powerful, huge) horizontal boring machines. 5. At the carpet factory in ... (last, past, last) year, production improved. Already... (released, made, produced, made) 867 sq. meters ... (products, carpets and runners, carpet products). 6. It is known ... (to anyone, everyone, everyone) that even the most ... (good, excellent, excellent, excellent, excellent) ... working conditions are not yet ... (define, decide, provide, guarantee) success. 7. In this work, the author succeeded ... (to reveal, reveal, sing, depict, describe, present) tragic events in life ... (of his generation, his peers, his contemporaries). 8. This ... (flaw, flaw, defect) in detail can be ... (seen, identified, identified, noticed, noted) with the naked eye. 9. The winner of the competition ... (awarded, assigned, issued, allocated) prize. 10. In a new hotel, ... (primary, primary, main, leading, most important) attention is paid to ... (good, excellent, impeccable, optimal, attentive) guest service.

Exercise 3. What caused the illogicality, absurdity of the statement in the above sentences? Eliminate logical and lexical errors, formulate the thought correctly.

1. When you read poetry, you meet now unknown words: cheeks, hand, flame, voice. They were used by writers, creating the flavor of antiquity in fiction. 2. We learn about this woman, so unlike her letters, something new that made her related to the composer; we see her face reading his letter, her thin figure walking through a beautiful park. 3. The ballerina creates a soulful image of Giselle - from a joyful girl who believes in love, to the tragic death of the heroine. 4. I love Moscow very much, and how can I not love it, because I myself am from Tambov. 5. The sprinkler has already been put into operation; long jets rising up early in the morning do not fall until late in the evening, watering the meadow with herbs growing on it. 6. Many hundreds of people go to farms every morning to do the usual, most everyday business - to produce milk, raise livestock and poultry. 7. Farm workers must strictly adhere to the cow calving schedule.

Exercise 4. Indicate speech errors, edit sentences.

Exercise 5. Indicate lexical errors in the following sentences, while highlighting cases of violation of semantic and grammatical compatibility. Edit sentences.

1. Young birch oak grove turned green outside the outskirts. 2. Children pronounce a poem, standing scattered. 3. The movie "The Return of the Black Blonde" is in theaters. 4. The bus was so crowded that someone suggested: "Stand flat, then it will be freer!". 5. Records continue. 6. Suddenly she noticed: a cat is walking along the corridor on tiptoe. 7. Most of the time passes fruitlessly. 8. The teacher invited us to write test orally. 9. At the zoo, a small kangaroo sat in a cage and cleaned its feathers. 10. There is a monstrous improvement in living conditions. 11. The experience of recent years inevitably shows the correctness of these gloomy forecasts. 12. Widespread testing of this vitamin bioactive cream has led to extremely positive results. 13. The stranger mounted a horse and rode on foot. 14. A three-year-old Parisian sits barefoot in the sandbox and, digging in the sand, wears with grace and ease the simplest soiled dress. Who taught her grace? 15. From fatigue, my body gave way on my feet. 16. The restaurant was filled with a cheerful hubbub, the guitar sobbed angrily, the drum groaned. 17. Several new businesses and public transport have appeared in our town. 18. Stand still and do not wave your eyes (from the speech of the educator in kindergarten). 19. This is how I clench my fists on my arms and legs! (child's speech) 20. Yesterday I took a plane and flew to Moscow (from a foreigner's speech).

Exercise 6. In the following sentences, indicate phrases in which lexical compatibility is violated. Replace lexical equivalents that caused speech errors.

1. You have to spend a lot of nerves reading letters from veterans. 2. The above metal was not delivered to the customer plant. 3. By the time the apartment was exchanged, the wife, daughter and things were registered in it. 4. Grief did not break this woman, her love for work, her courage. 5. There are people who, having done a lot, good and useful, quietly and modestly keep silent about it. 6. The teacher should give advice and comments to his students. 7. A frost hit, and the corn was severely grabbed. 8. We coped with the task confidently. 9. Sponsors donated a library to the school, board games. 10. Mentor wholeheartedly scolded me for breaking the cutter. 11. I do not think that there will be people who would seriously profess the opinion of this eccentric. 12. When a pilot gets into the cockpit of an unbroken plane, he thinks: who is the first, if not me? 13. But the sergeant was not destined to complete the investigation. On the evening of July 28, the ship "Mstislav Keldysh" suddenly left the scene, leaving a mourning wreath on the waves. 14. I ask for your permission to write me half a ton of coal.

the same ravine means the estate is close. Poplars are already visible in the distance
rone black smoke. Someone is walking toward you waving a handkerchief.
(According to A.P. Chekhov).

Test No. 3

1. Specify speech errors and edit sentences.
1. He started writing songs in his deep youth, and that's just
now glory fell upon his whitened head. 2. These
years, there has been a rapid growth of our cinematography. 3. Ivanov
has been working in this difficult area for a long time, and works well. But in
the last two years he began to have negative glimpses.
4. He set so many world records that only people remember them.
notorious fans of sports statistics.

2. Explain the meaning of the expressions.
Sink into oblivion, Sisyphean labor, the thread of Ariadne, the sword of Damocles, Achilles
wood heel.

3. Test your knowledge of the meanings of borrowed words:
pick up words-synonyms of Russian origin for them.
Limit, license, knockout, memorandum, philanthropist, nuance, obstruction
tion, opposition, palliative, parameter, pacifism, priority.

4. Stress the following words and use them in
phrases.
Insinuation, status, reputation, resume, offer, facsimile, engagement
fattening, appeal, penalty.

5. Check your knowledge of foreign words:
a) p about take foreign word, equivalent in value to:
faithful, benevolent
half measure
vulgar, rude

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illegitimate son
decide by vote
cannibal
front view of a person or object
a work of ancient culture or a fragment thereof
position opposed to the thesis
b) choose Russian word, equivalent in value to:
phenomenon
statute
outrageous
prerogative
offer
summary
reputation
impeachment
insinuation
congenial

Test No. 4

1. Use words in the genitive plural
numbers.
Tomato, poker, waffle, shoe, boot, towel, miner, epaulette,
Englishman, bottom, stocking, sock, glasses, orange, cherry, cherry, ba-
ryshnya.

2. Eliminate errors in the harmonization of definitions and applications
zhenii, motivate your stylistic editing.
1. Four newly built eight-story houses are already
selenium. 2. Two recently refurbished rooms for rent.
3. I want to read a historical novel or short story. 4. We live
we have been at the dacha for the last five years. 5. Last year was for an actor
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fruitful: played three new roles. 6. Four nine-story
buildings will be assembled entirely from large blocks.

3. Choose the correct case form and the right preposition
to the words below.
For example: alternative - what; argue what.
Supervisor, incriminate, inspire, compensate,
pay, pay, report, patent, grant, present,
claim equal rights (with each other / each other), according to, co-
figuratively, respectively, trend, superiority - advantage
(above / in front).

4. Place punctuation marks. Explain their setup.
Donetsk road. A gloomy village whitening lonely in the steppe
quiet with walls hot from the heat without one shadow, it seems without people.
The train has already left, having left you here, and its noise is heard a little bit and
freezes at last.
Near the station it is deserted and there are no other horses except yours. You
get into the carriage it's so nice after the car roll along the steppe
road and before you, little by little, pictures are opened which are not under
Moscow is huge and endless in its monotony. steppe steppe and
nothing more in the distance an old mound or a windmill is being transported on oxen
coal. Birds alone fly low over the plain and dead
the movement of their wings is drowsy. Hot. Another hour passed
all the steppe steppe and all the mound in the distance. Your coachman says something
often pointing aside with a whip something long and unnecessary and soul
serenity seizes the past does not want to think ... Steppe steppe
... Horses run the sun higher and higher and it seems that then in childhood the steppe
never been in July so rich such lush grass in bloom green
yellow lilac white, and from them and from the heated earth comes the aroma and
some strange blue birds on the way...
and it seems that he would agree to go all his life like this and look at the steppe of the devil
final monotonous but alluring and bewitching.

Practical lesson No. 1. Conceptual accuracy of speech. Lexical compatibility

Task 1. Indicate lexical errors in the following sentences. Edit.

1. The experience of recent years inevitably shows the correctness of these gloomy forecasts. 2. Widespread testing of this vitamin bioactive cream has led to extremely positive results. 3. A lot of nerves have to be spent correcting and redoing documents for auditing. 4. There are people who, having done a lot, good and useful, quietly and modestly keep silent about it. 5. The teacher sometimes gives advice and comments to his students. 6. Mentor wholeheartedly scolded me for breaking the cutter. 7. I do not think that there will be people who would seriously profess the opinion of this eccentric. 8. When a pilot gets into the cockpit of an unbroken plane, he thinks: who is the first, if not me? 9. He began to write songs in his deep youth, and only now glory fell upon his gray-haired head. 10. During these years, there has been an exuberant growth in our cinematography. 11. Ivanov has been working in this difficult area for a long time, and he does a good job. But in the last two years, he began to have negative glimpses. 12. The students of our group have achieved a deterioration in discipline and academic performance in this semester. 13. It is forbidden to place household and industrial waste dumps. 14. In our work, moral and labor education is of primary importance.

Exercise. 2. Evaluate the use of lexical means in the above sentences; indicate the use of the word without regard to its semantics; vagueness of the statement, distortion of meaning, absurdity and comicality of speech.

1. Decade of Uzbek cuisine in the restaurant will be held for five days: from 1 to 5 September. 2. At the exam, he mixed up not only all the myths, but also the names of ancient heroes and gods. 3. Farmers don't pay enough attention to fertilizing their fields. 4. Good workers in our company are awarded with the Board of Honor. 5. The new film is doomed to great success with the widest circles of the public. 6. The Polish attache did not lose his head and immediately paid a lightning visit to the Spanish ambassador in order to forestall this sudden decision.

Task 3. Analyze the sentences, find cases of violation of lexical compatibility, contamination of phrases that are close in meaning, use of a word without taking into account its semantics. Edit.

Practical lesson No. 2. Conceptual accuracy of speech. Substitution of a concept, expansion, narrowing of a concept, use of a specific concept instead of a generic one

Task 1. Compare the sentences, determine the nature of the errors (alogism, substitution of the concept, unjustified expansion or narrowing of the concept, the use of an abstract noun instead of a specific one, ambiguity or illogicality of the statement due to incorrect word usage)

Tasks for independent work

Task 1. Analyze the sentences. Find logical and lexical errors. Write down your edit option in the right column:

Task 2. Analyze a fragment of the text taken from a newspaper article. Which of the logical laws is violated in it?

Tremors continue in the Pamir Mountains. Today, at 2:25 Moscow time, the residents were awakened by a new earthquake. Pamir is a mountainous country in Central Asia. The highest point of the Pamirs is 7495 m.

Antique, classical Mythology, languages

Innate, born Talent, mind

Hospitable, hospitable, hospitable

reception, host, person

pernicious, pernicious

Influence, action

One, one

Moment, moment

Long, lasting, long, long-term, long-lastingImpact, period, way, fees, credit

Put forward, express, correct, eliminate Hypothesis, conjecture, shortcomings, errors.

Find, gain Support, support.

Impose, leave an imprint, trace.

To discover, discover the Law, regularity.

Prove, substantiate Theorem, theory.

Foreshadow, predict Defeat, success.

To expand, increase, increase Opportunities, potential.

Exercise 13. Indicate speech errors, edit sentences.

Exercise 14. Indicate lexical errors in the following sentences, while highlighting cases of violation of semantic and grammatical compatibility. Edit sentences.

1. Young birch oak grove turned green outside the outskirts. 2. Children pronounce a poem, standing scattered. 3. The movie "The Return of the Black Blonde" is in theaters. 4. The bus was so crowded that someone suggested: "Stand flat, then it will be freer!". 5. Records continue. 6. Suddenly she noticed: a cat is walking along the corridor on tiptoe. 7. Most of the time passes fruitlessly. 8. The teacher suggested that we write a test orally. 9. At the zoo, a small kangaroo sat in a cage and cleaned its feathers. 10. There is a monstrous improvement in living conditions. 11. The experience of recent years inevitably shows the correctness of these gloomy forecasts. 12. Widespread testing of this vitamin bioactive cream has led to extremely positive results. 13. The stranger mounted a horse and rode on foot. 14. A three-year-old Parisian sits barefoot in the sandbox and, digging in the sand, wears with grace and ease the simplest soiled dress. Who taught her grace? 15. From fatigue, my body gave way on my feet. 16. The restaurant was filled with a cheerful hubbub, the guitar sobbed angrily, the drum groaned. 17. Several new businesses and public transport have appeared in our town. 18. Stand still and do not wave your eyes (from the speech of a kindergarten teacher). 19. This is how I clench my fists on my arms and legs! (child's speech) 20. Yesterday I took a plane and flew to Moscow (from a foreigner's speech).

Exercise 15. In the following sentences, indicate phrases in which lexical compatibility is violated. Replace lexical equivalents that caused speech errors.

1. You have to spend a lot of nerves reading letters from veterans. 2. The above metal was not delivered to the customer plant. 3. By the time the apartment was exchanged, the wife, daughter and things were registered in it. 4. Grief did not break this woman, her love for work, her courage. 5. There are people who, having done a lot, good and useful, quietly and modestly keep silent about it. 6. The teacher should give advice and comments to his students. 7. A frost hit, and the corn was severely grabbed. 8. We coped with the task confidently. 9. Sponsors donated a library and board games to the school. 10. Mentor wholeheartedly scolded me for breaking the cutter. 11. I do not think that there will be people who would seriously profess the opinion of this eccentric. 12. When a pilot gets into the cockpit of an unbroken plane, he thinks: who is the first, if not me? 13. But the sergeant was not destined to complete the investigation. On the evening of July 28, the ship "Mstislav Keldysh" suddenly left the scene, leaving a mourning wreath on the waves. 14. I ask for your permission to write me half a ton of coal.

1. Now I am dead, I have become the sheets of a book, and you can leaf through me (Vol.). 2. I myself do not like grumpy old men And yet I am sincerely glad That I have not experienced the dishonor of ranks And the meanness of lordly awards (Got.). 3. The cat turned out to be not only solvent, but also a disciplined beast (Bulg.). 4. Alexander Ivanovich Koreiko was in the last fit of his youth - he was 38 years old. 5. Every night Fyodor Nikitich was visited by the same seasoned Soviet dreams. 6. The earth was slightly touched by dark paint, and the leading star signaled the onset of night in a timely manner. 7. "Antelope" has earned itself a sour reputation, it needs to be repainted. 8. The commission, hung with beards, arrived at the artel "Revenge" on three spans. 9. At that time, most men grew such state-owned, loyal hair appliances on their faces. 10. A special breed of official furniture was grown. 11. A deep wrinkle appeared on Balaganov's serene, unplowed forehead. 12. Kozlevich, against his will, plunged into the abyss of the Criminal Code, into the world of chapter three, which instructively speaks of malfeasance (I. and P.).

1. The new film is doomed to great success with the widest circles of the public. 2. There is another explanation for such a productive score in this match. 3. For many years I have got used to everything and do not hide, but I am proud of my stainless youth. 4. The roof is tilted, of course, not for everyone. 5. You can’t put all the blame on some fashion designers, there are other fashion chefs, so you should ask them. 6. Our hero did not lose his head and immediately paid a lightning visit to the ambassador in order to prevent this sudden decision. 7. Yes, there were once men! Not like the current tribe. But individual magnificent specimens of men have not yet disappeared even today. 8. "Hello dear!" - he exclaimed, and, embracing the unexpected guest, inflicted on his salty lips a long friendly kiss. 9. An old fly selflessly beat its head against the glass. 10. Laurels of discoverers do not threaten us. 11. The new dress of the king marked the transition from evening dresses to correspondence. 12. New signs appeared in the local history museum of the city of Novokhromovsk: “Do not touch the exhibits with your hands. And feet too.

1.1.3. Speech deficiency

Exercise 18. Pay attention to speech insufficiency, note cases of ambiguity of the statement, distortion of its meaning. Correct the suggestions.

1. The exhibition of young artists in the House of Pioneers was such a success because Karpenko N.I. in drawing lessons she managed to bring up the beautiful in her students. 2. Student Belov won first place in English language. 3. They graduated from a vocational school, but in order to work well, you need direct experience at the machine tool. 4. For mistakes and shortcomings, the chairman of the state farm, Pashkov, deserves to be punished. 5. A few hours are enough to dress the whole family in warm mittens on a manual knitting machine. 6. The cash desk receives for the goods of toddler age. 7. The binding has become an integral part of the room decoration. 8. Mayakovsky's work excites readers in a variety of languages.